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with nuthing left in my heart,
i stand, alone in the dark.

im all used up, hollow inside.
you took all i had, and put none back.

so i cant even look at myself anymore,
i closed the door, trapped inside i hide.

not willing to let others see, that love
defeated me something so happy

so bright, took the light out of my life.
took the light from my eyes, now im blind

looking at the world only though tainted eyes,
not wanting to take it anymore, wanting to die.
©2007-2009 ~Death-Reaver
:icondeath-reaver:

Author's Comments

this is something i wrote for a friend, describing their feelings (not mine) so its about them not me.

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:iconclemce:
The words are so powerful! Great job

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Vulnerant omnes, ultima necat - Each hurt, the last one kills
:icondeath-reaver:
thankyou, glad you like it :)

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Dace
:iconzirconx:
Well.. This one I really like. No idea who it could be about but that's what I get for moving :)

Dedacative pieces generally bring out the best as you don't want you to be judged by what you write, but to portray the other person the best way you can. I think you've done very well.
:iconmoony88:
groovie

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I'm Not Wierd... I'm Gifted
I'm Not Fussy... I'm Selective
*~FarAway~*
:icondeath-reaver:
thankyou :) im glad you like it. and they dont know who they are, i jus get this feeling from them, and with the cahtting this is how it adds up :p

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Dace
:iconmoony88:
ur welcome

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I'm Not Wierd... I'm Gifted
I'm Not Fussy... I'm Selective
*~FarAway~*
:iconzirconx:
I love the lack of gender specifics.. 'them' and 'their'.. how cryptic. I'm really curious now ^^
:icondeath-reaver:
dont want to give away who its about now, do we :p

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Dace

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